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Monday |
Tuesday |
Wednesday |
Thursday |
Friday |
Week 1 |
JAN 9 -Classes start @ 4pm |
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JAN 11 -Introduction to class, peers, syllabus -[25]
Assign Connection Letter (complete in class?) -Listen to some punk lyrics while writing |
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JAN 13 -Read Letters out loud (pg. 6, #4 –connect to punk) -[25] Design your CD/Book cover (due Monday) -Chpt 1 & Chpt
30 Discussion |
Week 2 |
JAN 16 -No Class (Martin Luther King Jr Day) |
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JAN 18 -Show off CD/Book covers in class -Chpt 2 & 3 Discussion and Activity
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JAN 20 -Chpt 4 Discussion -Write something for
Monday -PAPER
& PROJECT/DEADLINE DECISIONS DUE |
Week 3 |
JAN 23 -Chpt 5 Discussion -Revise what you wrote alone or in groups |
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JAN 25 -Chpt 6 & 7 Discussion -Edit what you wrote alone or in groups |
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JAN 27 -Chpt 8 Discussion -[50] Hand in revised & edited writing |
Week 4 |
JAN 30 -Personal Reflection (Chpt 10) -[25] Audience/Online Journals |
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FEB 1 -Personal Narrative (Chpt 9) -[25] Mini-Memoir |
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FEB 3 -Personal Description (Chpt 11) -[25] Mini-Profile |
Week 5 |
FEB 6 -Sign up for Conferences -REVISION DAY (pages 72-72 - blue box) & Punk
Survey! |
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FEB 8 -WORK DAY/Read Chpt 13 for Feb 17 -[No class – Instructor at conference] |
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FEB 10 -FIRST
DEADLINE DAY -[No class – Instructor at conference] |
Week 6 |
FEB 13 -Writing Conferences in my office (Haverty
223) (Sign up FEB 6) |
FEB 14 -WC |
FEB 15 -Writing Conferences in my office (Sign up FEB 6) |
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FEB 17 -SECOND
DEADLINE DAY -Chpt 13 Discussion and Activity
[25]/Presentations? -Introduce Vocabulary part of syllabus |
Week 7 |
FEB 20 -No Class (President’s Day) |
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FEB 22 -[25]
Intro to Annotated Bibliographies (music topic) -Library field trip? |
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FEB 24 -WORK DAY for Annotated Bibs, etc. -Read Chpts 14, 15 & 16 for Monday |
Week 8 Mid-Terms |
FEB 27 -Chpt 14, 15, & 16 Discussion -WORK DAY/Writing Conferences in class? |
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MARCH 1 -REVISION DAY (pages 72-72 – blue box)/WC in
class? -Sign up for Writing Conferences |
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MARCH 3 -THIRD
DEADLINE DAY/Presentations? -Chpt 31 Discussion |
Week 9 |
MARCH 6 -Writing Conferences -Study for Vocabulary Mid-Term |
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MARCH 8 -Vocabulary Mid-Term/Writing Conferences -Bring in lyrics to three fav songs for
March 20 |
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MARCH 10 -FORTH
DEADLINE DAY/Presentations? |
Week 10 |
MARCH 13 -No Class (Spring Break) |
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MARCH 15 -No Class (Spring Break) |
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MARCH 17 -No Class (Spring Break) |
Week 11 |
MARCH 20 -Poetry & Chpt 25 -Bring in lyrics to three favorite songs [25] |
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MARCH 22 -Poetry Component |
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MARCH 24 -[No class – Instructor at Online Training] |
Week 12 |
MARCH 27 -Watch Punk Documentary |
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MARCH 29 -Finish Punk Documentary -Chpt 17 Discussion |
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MARCH 31 -Multi-Vocal, Multi-Genre |
Week 13 |
APRIL 3 -WORK DAY -Other Genres not covered in the book |
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APRIL 5 -REVISION DAY -Sign Up for Writing Conferences |
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APRIL 7 -Out of class WORK DAY -[No Class – Instructor at conference] |
Week 14 |
APRIL 10 -Writing Conferences in my office |
APRIL 11 -WC |
APRIL 12 -FIFTH
DEADLINE DAY -Writing Conferences in my office? |
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APRIL 14 -No Class (Easter) |
Week 15 |
APRIL 17 -No Class (Easter) |
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APRIL 19 -Movie Scripts/Fiction -Vocabulary Activity [25] |
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APRIL 21 -SIXTH
DEADLINE DAY/Group Work out of class -[No class – Instructor at conference] |
Week 16 |
APRIL 24 -WORK DAY |
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APRIL 26 -REVISION DAY |
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APRIL 28 -WORK DAY for C2P2: Creative Class Punk Project |
Week 17 |
MAY 1 -Work on C2P2: Submission of final project by class due to me via
email on Wednesday, May 3 |
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MAY 3 -SEVENTH
AND LAST DEADLINE DAY -Presentations of Group Papers |
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MAY 5 -[50] Vocabulary Final Exam |
Week 18 Finals Week |
MAY 8 -Hand out C2P2 -Discussion of class/Listen to punk music |
MAY 9 |
MAY 10 -TBA |
MAY 11 |
MAY 12 |
NORTH DAKOTA STATE COLLEGE OF SCIENCE
“D.I.Y.” ENGLISH
COMPOSITION 110 – SPRING 2006
“Peel
me off this velcro seat and get me movin” [Longview, GreenDay]
Instructor’s Name- Sybil Priebe
Instructor’s Email-
sybil.priebe@ndscs.edu
Instructor’s Website-
www.sybilpriebe.com
Instructor’s Weblog-
www.xanga.com/teacher47
Office- Haverty
223
Office Phone- (701) 671-2346
Office Hours- 2-3 MWF & 2:30-3:30 TR (first 8 wks)
9-10 MTWRF
(last 8 wks)
Note: *The above PUNK CHART is not
set in stone. Updates will be in given in class and on the instructor’s
teaching weblog. Attending class regularly will keep
you up-to-date on assignment changes, due date changes, and other
announcements.
“Eat
your heart out on a plastic tray” [Problems, Sex Pistols]
For this type of English 110, punk rock roots have been set in place as the
theme. The reason for a “Do It Yourself” class is simple—to allow students more
freedom over what they learn and create in an English classroom. Punk rock,
itself, has always been known to shout it’s feelings about the world, and this
class will allow students to take back control over at least what they are
learning if not feel more in control of who they are and where they are going.
In that same vein, punk rock has always been about self-reliance (found in the
“D.I.Y.” idea); that “it is possible for you to do whatever you want, however
you want to do it” (*360). “Just like punks who form their own bands, write and
produce their own music, and put on their own shows, so too can students form
their own groups and work together to improve their writing. (*361)”
The class
will consist of main assignments (chosen by the student) as well as other
smaller assignments assigned and chosen by the instructor. Students will have
much say over the majority of the larger projects and papers. The only points
assigned by the instructor will be participation points and daily
activities/assignment points. [*One,
Optimism. “Punk Power in the First-Year Writing Classroom.” TETYC. 2005;
358-369.]
“And
I am going after it/ I wanted everything” [I Wanted Everything, Ramones]
>Book- The College Writer,
Houghton Mifflin, Copyright 2004,
ISBN: 0-618-40541-0
>An Email address (the
school’s, Yahoo!, AOL, or Hotmail, etc)... you’ll be saving your documents to
this account as added back-up (see end of syllabus for details)
>3.5” computer disk or USB storage device
“Better
call, call the law/When you gonna turn yourself in?
Yeah” [My Brain Is Hanging Upside Down, Ramones]
1.Punk Rock Rule: Respect each
others’ writing, opinions, responses, and property.
2.Respect goes both ways. If you are
talking, I will listen (as will the rest of the class). If I am talking, I’d
like all of you to listen. When music is playing, we all listen.
3.Packing up your things before
class time is over is disrespectful. Please wait until I dismiss the class or
you’ll be forced to listen to Lawrence Welk. I’m
serious.
4.Turn off cell phones unless
they play punk rock.
5.Slang,
swearing, and vernacular language are okay in essays and in class discussions
as long as the words are used to express oneself and not put anyone down.
6.Other rule
decided upon by class:
7.Other rule
decided upon by class:
“But
one thing they can’t teach you is how to feel free” [Schools Are Prisons, Sex
Pistols]
>Attendance is crucial to
understanding all of the course materials and to earning a passing grade.
>Students with excused absences
(illness with a doctor’s note, school-sponsored activities, military duty, or
family emergencies) have two weeks to make up missed assignments.
>If a student misses 5 class
periods due to unexcused absences, 100 points will be deducted from his/her
final points. If a student misses 7 class periods, 200 points will be deducted
from his/her total points. If a student were to miss 9 or more class periods,
he/she will receive an F for the course.
“My
brain is hanging upside down/ I need something to slow me down” [My Brain Is
Hanging Upside Down, Ramones]
Late work will not be accepted. If
you are going to be gone on a deadline date that you chose, arrange to hand in
the assignment earlier or talk to me about other arrangements. [If a band shows
up late to gig, they lose the gig. Not cool.] Also, the excuse that your disk
died or that you lost your USB in a mosh pit won’t
work – see the end of the syllabus for details.
“It took the
best years of my life/ And it made it so I couldn’t
decide” [Schools Are Prisons, Sex Pistols]
Any student with disabilities or
special needs, who requires special accommodations in this course, is invited
to share concerns or requests with me as soon as possible.
“Problem
problem/ Problem, the problems you/ What you gonna do” [Problems, Sex
Pistols]
What kind of punk would take
credit for someone else’s song or lyrics? Essentially, if any amount of
plagiarism is found in a student’s paper (copying from the internet without
quotations or parenthetical citations, copying parts or whole pages from
another student, or any other sign of plagiarism), that student will be subject
to disciplinary action which could result in no credit for the paper or a complete
revision of the paper with a large reduction in points. If a student repeatedly
plagiarizes, more severe actions will take place.
“Welcome
to Paradise” [Green Day]
300 points = 3 Individual Papers
and/or Projects [100 points each]
100 points = Group Paper
400 points = [25]
Assignments/daily assignments and homework [25 pts each x 16]
(About 18 will be assigned;
students get to drop the two lowest grades.) The Vocabulary Mid-Term and Final
Exam are included in the [25] Assignments (as shown on the chart).
100 points = C2P2: Creative Class
Punk Project
100 points =
Participation (explained in detail below)
GRADE SCALE
900-1000 pts = A
800-899 pts = B
700-799 pts = C
600-699 pts = D
599 and below = F
“Play that funky music white boy!” [Wild Cherry]
Papers and/or
Projects chosen by student:
Requirements:
(1) students must choose 4 projects and/or papers to complete within the
semester (out of the list below),
(2) 2 of those 4 projects and/or papers must be completed before Spring
Break,
(3) 1 of the projects and/or papers must be a group project (2-3 people
total), and
(4) papers must be at least 3 pages in length (group papers should exceed
5) and projects must be accompanied by at least a 10 minute demonstration or
presentation (group demonstrations/presentations should exceed 15 minutes).
Students will get 5 Bonus points for presenting a paper that doesn’t require a
presentation (see Assignment Choice descriptions below to find out which ones
qualify for bonus.)
Assignment Choices:
Music Paper & Project: Since the class is built on the theories of punk rock,
it’s only appropriate to offer a paper which allows students to research their
favorite genre. The project part of the assignment requires students to conduct
a survey of at least 20+ students about the specific genre. [Works Cited page
required.] [Presenation = Bonus.] [For ideas,
scroll through this blog (click on the month of February under Archives): http://english120controversy.blogspot.com/]
The “Stretch” Project: Stretch yourself into learning something. Have you always wanted to learn
the history of a particular type of genre? Or have you wondered about what
someone’s handwriting says about them? Maybe you are curious as to how the
religion of Islam works? Perhaps, you’d like to stretch your brain into
learning how to play the guitar, fiddle with Photoshop, or maneuver around in
PowerPoint. This assignment allows you to create the topic you want to learn
about and dive right in. [Works Cited page required.] [Presentation = Bonus.] [Examples of this project can be found at: https://sybilisticism.tripod.com/multi_vocalex.htm,
http://viper_06.tripod.com/freshmaneng/id2.html, http://bradyhelland.tripod.com/ralph/]
The Multi-Genre Paper: Sick of boring formats for research papers? Want to break some rules of
what a normal paper should look like and sound like? A multi-genre paper takes
five or more genres (comic strips, poems, stories, reviews, descriptions,
quotes, commentaries, letters, etc) and mixes them together using a topic or
subject (i.e. “Who are You?”) as the connecting theme. This paper needs to be
organized a little differently than ‘regular’ papers because the genre will
cause a disruption in the flow. Nevertheless, this paper can be fun and
challenging. [Presentation = Bonus.] [An
example of this paper can be found at:
https://sybilisticism.tripod.com/multi-genreexample.htm]
The Multi-Vocal Essay: This essay would work well as a group essay since you need many voices,
hence the “vocal” part of the title. Essentially, this works the same as the
multi-genre paper in that there will be a different type of flow to the piece.
Instead of multiple genres, students will connect multiple voices on the same
topic. Groups of students in the past have picked a topic (the first year of
college, things to do on/off campus, etc) and then gave their separate
opinions/stories relating to that topic. Afterward the individual pieces are
done, the group then cuts and pastes the essay together giving it some type of
organization (based chronologically, for example). [Presentation = Required.] [An example of this type of essay can be found at:
https://sybilisticism.tripod.com/multi_vocalex.htm]
Web Site: Since we are in the day and age of “Hey, just go online to
www.whatever.com,” students could use this project to create a web site and
then write up instructions (to be placed on the web site) as to how it was set
up. The web site must also include 5 web pages with some sort of connecting
content on them. If students take information or images from other sources,
those sources should be listed on a separate, sixth web page with links. This
project must include a visual presentation and demonstration of the completed
web site. [Works Cited required.] [Presentation = Required.] [An example of this project can be found at:
www.sybilpriebe.com]
Movie/Documentary: This particular project may be too time-consuming for the ‘average’
student, but for those considering going into film or the arts, this project
will be a miniature test of what is involved when creating a mini-movie or
mini-documentary. This project may be done in groups of up to three people, if
necessary. The topic is of the student’s choice, of course, and the project
must include a premiere of the movie or documentary in class. The final product
should be between 10-30 minutes. [Music videos also fall under this category.]
The instructor recommends using iMovie (found on Macintosh) to edit and create
the final product. [Presentation = Required.] [An example of this project will be shown in class,
hopefully.]
An Essay
Using Alternative Style: There are
many, many choices that fall within this category. The instructor will allow
anyone to view the book where the ideas for this category came from.
Essentially, it’s an extension of the Multi-Genre Paper & Multi-Vocal
Essay. [Presentation = Bonus.] [An example
of this type of writing will be handed out in class or linked to through my
teaching weblog.]
“Open Option” Paper: This paper essentially allows students a open option – endless topic
& genre possiblities (narrative, descriptive, definition, etc). Before
completing this paper, write up a proposal as to what you would like to do with
the open option to the instructor three weeks before the deadline you’ve
chosen. [Works Cited page may be required.] [Presentation = Bonus.]
PowerPoint Essay: This type of project is an essay or paper in a more visual format.
Students can use photos and images to add meaning to their essay. Students will
place their paper (1-2 pages in length) in a PowerPoint document and add images,
music/sound, and movement. [Presentation = Required.] [An
example of this essay will be shown in class.]
“Survey Says!” Project: This project asks students to survey 20-30 people about the same topic
(not music-related, that’s the first choice above). Students will then write up
a report about their findings. Students should also use charts and graphs to
show off their statistics. This project is excellent for anyone going into a
science/math related field. [Presentation = Bonus.]
A Work
of Fiction: Like to write stories? Then, this is the
choice for you. Remember- fiction isn’t fact. [Presentation = Bonus.] [An example of this type of writing can be found at: https://sybilisticism.tripod.com/individual.html
(click on underlined words to continue the story in different paths)]
Narrative Interview Paper: Pick a topic -> Create ten questions about that topic -> Create a
hypothesis about how the interviewees will respond -> Interview five family
members or friends -> Write up a narration of what you discovered- Was your
hypothesis correct? [Presentation = Bonus.] [An
example of this paper will be handed out in class or linked to through my
teaching weblog.]
A Literary Analysis Paper: If you are kind of a gossip queen or you like to tear
apart what people mean when they say certain things, then this may be a paper
for you to try out. Basically, read whatever you’d like (a punk book, a novel,
a biography of your favorite rock star, etc) and then analyze it. Be critical.
Be a punk. [Works Cited page required.] [Presentation = Bonus.] [An example of this paper will be handed out in class or
linked to online through my teaching weblog.]
Commentary/Opinion Paper: Got an opinion? Vent it. Get it out. Then organize the
“ventings.” Add research from others to back yourself up (3 sources). Revise thoughts and venting. Edit. [Works
Cited page required.] [Presentation = Bonus.] [An example of this paper will be handed out in class or
linked to online through my teaching weblog (George Carlin). For additional
ideas, check out andrewsullivan.com]
Photo Essay: Buy a disposable camera -> take photos of your day-to-day activities
-> write up narrative and/or descriptive entries for each photo (at least
10) with a connecting theme such as: “A Day in the Life of _______,” or “Me at
11:11am and 11:11pm for Five Days,” etc. [Presentation = Required.] [An example of this essay will be shown in class or
linked to online through my teaching weblog.]
[25] Assignments:
This category deals with daily
work in and out of class. These assignments follow the late work rule as
detailed above. As far as vocabulary goes- In order to expand everyone’s
vocabulary and spelling skills, you will, as a class, assign words daily to
learn. These words can be words that are difficult to spell, difficult to
pronounce, or just easily confused with other words (ex – defiantly vs.
definitely). A mid-term and a final will be given on the words you decide to
learn on a daily basis. These can be punk words; that’s alright by me. It’s a
punk-based class afterall!
C2P2: Creative
Class Punk Project:
Students will design and create
the class’s final project. Students will have total say over the design of the
project (will it be a booklet, a newsletter, a brochure?), and students will
have to submit to the project as well as participate in the creation of it.
This includes editing each other’s work for publication. This class project
should include a submission from each person in class; therefore, the length
will be determined by amount of students and length of each student’s
submission.
Participation:
Students who show up on each and
every WORK DAY and REVISION DAY (as shown on the PUNK CHART) and work
on their projects as well as use REVISION DAYS for revising in groups (having
others read their work and give them feedback – vice versa), will receive the
full 100 points allotted to this category. *Students must do more than just
come to class to receive these points. Duh.
“We
don’t need no education” [Pink Floyd]
I will comment on the following areas in your papers/writing
assignments. They provide an outline for you to look at and use when writing:
Material- Is the
material well-chosen for the particular situation, audience, and purpose?
A.Generalizations backed up with specific supporting
detail.
B.All points adequately covered, with no unnecessary
material.
C.Accurate information (research genre)
D.All points logically presented and supported.
E.Material
free of contradications.
Organization- Is the
material well organized for the particular situation? Does the format support the
organization?
A.Clear, logical overall structure, signal (where
appropriate) by headings, etc.
B.Clear,
logical paragraph structure.
C.Smooth
transitions.
D.Appropriate introduction and conclusion.
E.Well-placed
material (for logical, psychological effect, and emphasis).
Style- Is the
style appropriate for the situation, audience, and the writer's ethos?
A.Clarity- Are any of the sentences confusing?
B.Emphasis- Can the reader find
your main points?
C.Tone- Is it serious? Humorous?
Can the reader tell?
D.Diction: Appropriate, avoids cliches
and unnecessary jargon.
E.Sentence Structure: Avoids monotony or an over
complex style.
Mechanics- meets at
least a general standard
for
mechanical correctness (one error per 100 words).
A.Grammar- Did you use the correct subject-verb
agreement?
B.Spelling- Did you use definitely and defiantly
correctly, for example?
C.Punctuation- Have you used semi-colons correctly?
Does each sentence have a punctuation mark at the end?
“Your number’s been purged from
our central computer” [Dead Kennedys]
In order to back-up your work, you
should save the document to a disk and send it to your email account. This
ensures that it won’t get lost. To save a document to your email inbox, simply:
·
Save the document to the
desktop of the computer you are working on.
·
Open up Internet Explorer
(or Netscape, etc) and go to your email account.
·
Compose a new email
addressed to yourself.
·
Click on “Attach” and
attach your file/document/image, etc.
·
Find your way back to the original
email, and click Send.
·
After a few moments have
passed, go to your Inbox to make sure the document is there before you delete
it from the desktop of the computer.
Rarely does an email provider like
Hotmail or Yahoo lose documents, so this will take care of the excuse that your
disk, etc has busted and your work has vanished. That excuse won’t be necessary
to use in this class. *If you feel unsure about just sending the document to
yourself, send it to a friend as well. *If Hotmail is unable to download your docuemnt, set up an account with Yahoo. I haven’t had
difficulties downloading documents from my email account for years. *Watch out
when you use a Macintosh/Apple and then use a IBM
product – sometimes the documents don’t translate well if at all.
Definition of Letter Grades:
A- Outstanding Work. Shows a superior completion of assignment. Provides excellent selection of content, organization, and wording
of material to fit the rhetorical needs of the particular situation. Uses a style that is fluent and coherent. Has
few if any mechanical errors. Shows clear understanding of
readings, insight, perceptiveness, orginality, and
thought.
B- Good Work. Significantly above
level necessary to meet course requirements. Has a thorough, well-organized analysis
of the assignment. Shows judgment and tact in presentation of
material appropriate for the intended audience and purpose. Supports ideas well with concrete details. Has an
interesting, precise, and clear style. Is free of major
mechanical errors. Strong, interesting work, although
minor problems remain.
C- Meets all basic requirements of the
course and assignments. Provides a satisfactory analysis
of the writing task, subject, and audience. Accomplishes
its purpose with adequate content and detail. Uses detail, organization,
and expression appropriate for the rhetorical context. Has acceptable
mechanics. Nothing remarkably good or bad about the work.
D- Meets the assignment, but is weak in
one of the major areas (content, organization, style, mechanics)
or offers a routine, inadequate treatment. Shows generally
substandard work with some redeeming features.
F- Unacceptable Work in one or more
of the major areas. Fails to meet one or more of the basic
requirements of the course or the assignment. May fail to cover
essential points, or may digress to nonessential material. May lack
development, organization, show poor tone, or simply may be unclear quite
often.
Seth Kahn-Egan’s “principles of ‘punk’”: 1) The Do-It-Yourself
(D.I.Y.) ethic, which demands that we do our own work because anybody who would
do our work for us is only trying to jerk us around; 2) A sense of anger and
passion that finally drives a writer to say what’s really on his/her mind; 3) A
sense of destructiveness that calls for attacking institutions when those
institutions are oppressive, or even dislikable; 4) A willingness to endure or
even pursue pain to make oneself heard or noticed; 5) A pursuit of the
“pleasure principle,” a reveling in some kind of *Nietzschean
chasm. [*For existentialism, human beings can be
understood only from the inside, in terms of their lived and experienced
reality and dilemmas, not from the outside, in terms of a biological,
psychological, or other scientific theory of human nature. It emphasizes action,
freedom, and decision as fundamental to human existence.]